jueves, 14 de febrero de 2013

A day in Marcel’s life



I´m a monkey living in the city, my name is Marcel. I’m a capuchin monkey. I used to lived in a circus were my life wasn’t good at all. There, sometimes I was hungry and cold but not anymore because my owner rescued me from there. Now I’m happy but sometimes I miss playing as I did in the circus.

Now I’m too happy but there was a day that I almost went back to the circus.

 I was at home It was late at night, almost might night, the weather was pretty nice. Lately it was being too cold but not today. That day my owner was going to go out but she forgot to close the door. I thought that it could go out of my house. I needed to know what else was outside for a couple of minutes. I thought it wasn't wrong.

In front of my house there is a park and there are a lot of trees and grass.  It was nice walking without a leash. I saw so many new things like grey birds who made estrange movements whit her heads, squirrels; also I saw a men jumping over the park’s fence... Suddenly I realized that it was my last owner, maybe he was looking for more animals for his circus, I was too afraid so I run too fast and I didn’t really know if he was chasing me but as fast i could I arrived to my house.

That´s was the last time I tried to go out by my own. I’m glad y could return safely so I won’t do it again.

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  1. Now I am happy, but that day I almost went back...I was at home, it was late and almost midnight....lately it had been cold but not today...strange movements with their heads...so I ran as fast as I could to get home...I could return safely....

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